Well, my entry finally got reviewed on Game Chef. It was about what I expected. I did a very rush job of putting this together and I was barely able to get through all the mechanics of the game, but given the feedback I received, I have a fairly good idea of how I want to improve this game to make it really good. I feel like once I put some more effort into the fluff, the mechanics of the game (once explained more fully) will hold up.
Thanks for the Review.